10-A Elevator Pitch 1




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  1. Nala MckieSeptember 30, 2019 at 7:38 AM

    Hi Nathan,

    I thought you did a great job with your elevator pitch. I thought the delivery could have been smoother, but I liked that it didn't seem too rehearsed. I also thought that you could have been a little more enthusiastic about your product. However, I think that your personal story made it clear why this endeavor means a lot to you.

    Great post!

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  2. Cara LeydigSeptember 30, 2019 at 7:56 AM

    Hey Nathan,
    I really really loved your idea! My opportunity is about environmental awareness as well! I think that the first 10 seconds could've been more grabbing and interesting, maybe with more enthusiasm! I think that you gave this pitch a little too casual, but overall very well!

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  3. JaredUFSeptember 30, 2019 at 8:24 AM

    Hi Nathan,

    I really enjoyed watching your elevator pitch and really do think you have a great idea. Through your elevator pitch it was easy to feel the importance of your idea, as well. I am a fan of talking to people with a lot of energy, so I think that this is something that you could implement right off the bat. Overall, however, great work! I would love to see where this idea could actually go.

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