22A- Elavator Pitch 3




2) What stood out to me that I needed to work on is be more informational, like including the cost but I don't really have an idea of what it would cost but I do know it would be somewhat cheap. I don't want to mislead the reader just in case production prices are a little higher than expected. I'd rather reel them in with my idea. I also did this pitch with less nerves and spoke more clearly which I think helps my pitch tremendously. 

3) I feel like my idea was presented clearly with a great diagram to show how my product works and a change from last time was I included both a little history of how my product started and a diagram of how it works and talked about a brief rewards program and explained how it would work so my customer gets a good grip to what my product and idea is all about. 

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  1. FahadNovember 10, 2019 at 7:16 PM

    Hi Nathan!

    Having gone back and looked through your previous iterations of your elevator pitch after watching this version, I felt that the improvements you made are clearly visible. I feel that beyond a certain point, a script can't do much, and that the confidence that a speaker conveys help an elevator pitch stand out a lot, with your confidence really helping you stand out. Additionally, I felt that your diagram really helped me get a concrete idea of what your products aims to do, and feel that if you were asked to revise your pitch again, might be able to improve on that by building a prototype to pitch that same idea, something which might also be able to work for my pitch.

    Thanks for sharing!

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  2. Nala MckieNovember 12, 2019 at 7:31 AM

    Hi Nathan,

    I really appreciated your clarification of cost. I agree that you shouldn't mislead buyer so you shouldn't solidify a number without knowing if it is accurate. I also think that it was great that you added a personal story of why you decided to make this product. I know that personal stories always help me feel more connected to a product that I would buy

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