17-A Elevator Pitch 2



2) The feedback from my last pitch was very important to the forming of my new pitch because a lot of the comments were saying about how I was struggling to get my point across and I was nervous and I feel like I fixed some of it by condensing the information so that it is easier for me to explain. I also included a drawing to help the person watching be more engaged and understand my idea more clearly. 

3) Based on the feedback I added a live drawing that helped me help the person watching picture my product and idea and to further add to the value of my product and the effect it has on the person watching. 

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  1. Nala MckieOctober 28, 2019 at 8:19 AM

    Hi Nathan,

    I really liked your inclusion of the drawing. I feel like that illustration helped me understand exactly how your product works. I may have missed it, but I don't think that you included how much you were asking for; but that's okay! I feel like you seemed a lot less nervous and it seem like a normal, casual conversation. I think you improved a lot.

    Great work!

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